Cloche’s Cosmosphere is complete at long last. Here is a smorgasbord of problems from the last two levels. Of course, some mild to severe spoilers are scattered throughout.

How can you perform in front of someone that is somewhere they need to be lured out of?

Cloche(1) :4:4:
JP::そうよ。
おもてなしするのなら、
やっぱり綺麗な音楽でご招待したいじゃない。
EN::Yes. We should lure them out by performing in front of them.
NEW:Yes, if we want to welcome them, what better way than with lovely music?

What.

Cloche(1) :17:17:
JP::貴方のお陰で、私は自らがしたいこと…自らが成すべき事を主張することの大切さを知ったわ…。
EN::I got to realize how important it is to know what I want to do, and to voice it out…
NEW:You showed me the importance of asserting what I want to… what I ought to accomplish.

NISA decided to change the name of one of Cloche’s personas, for some reason. Reisu became Reish, which is particularly confusing because Luca’s mother’s name is Reisha. Midorino became Ryokuya, which can be gotten phonetically from the same kanji 緑野, but the voice track makes it obvious. On level 3:

???(132) :18:18:
JP::クローシェ！？誰よそれ。
私はレイス。緑野麗珠よ。
EN::Cloche!? Who? I’m Reish. Reish Ryokuya.
NEW:Who’s Cloche? I’m Reisu. Reisu Midorino.

Ah, and the confusion with Reisha comes through at the end of the Cosmosphere. NISA themselves had Croix call Cloche’s persona by Luca’s mother’s name on Level 9:

Croix(3) :2:2:
JP::貴方は…麗珠さん…。
学園世界での歌…とっても上手でした。
また一緒にカラオケに行きましょう。
EN::You are… Miss Reisha… You were such a good singer. I would want to go to karaoke with you again.
NEW:You’re… Miss Reisu. The great singer from the school world. Let’s go to karaoke again some time.

Plenty of Japanese words have several English words that they could be translated as, depending on the intention. Here Cloche’s use of “important” makes it seem like she has some unimportant personas. No, she is just describing the way she feels about all of her personas: they’re precious.

Cloche(1) :5:5:
JP::貴方は私の大切な人格の１人…
『可能性』の資源を持つ人格よ…。
EN::You are one of my important personalities… You possess the “Possibility”…
NEW:You are one of my precious personas. You bear the trait of “Potential”.

Similarly, throughout the final level, the ceremonial greeting, acknowledgment, and thanking of the personas is called “approving”. This makes it seem like the personas are being judged somehow, or going through some bureaucratic process. The original word 承認 has a lot of possible translations, and “recognition” is much more appropriate.

(105) :6:6:
JP::…ありがとう…私を承認してくれて。
EN::…Thank you… for approving me.
NEW:Thank you… for recognizing me.

A case of not taking the previous line of dialogue into account.

Croix(3) :31:31:
JP::クローシェ様！まだ大丈夫ですよ！
EN::Lady Cloche! We can’t give up yet!
NEW:Lady Cloche! It’s still all right!

Cloche(1) :32:32:
JP::無理よ！
キュオールが出てこなければ…これ以上の
人格は復活できないのだから…
EN::I can’t! We can’t get all the personalities back without Cural…
NEW:It’s hopeless! Without Cural, we can’t bring back any more personas…

Another important word in the final level was translated as “invite”. While that is certainly the most common translation for 招待, it doesn’t make sense if you pay attention to the story. Croix and Cloche have to magically bring the personas from their homes, and when they arrive they are confused of where they are and how they got there. Clearly they weren’t *invited,* they were *summoned.*

(105) :1:1:
JP::…私…一体…
どうしてここに…
EN::…Why… why am I here…
NEW:Why… Why am I here…

Croix(3) :2:2:
JP::貴方にお礼を言うために、
この階層へ招待させていただいたのです。
EN::We’ve invited you here to give you our appreciation.
NEW:We’ve summoned you to this stratum to thank you.

“That’s true.” Disgraceful.

(105) :3:3:
JP::私が元凶なのに…
此の私という存在を消し去ってしまった元凶なのに…私にそんな資格…ありません…。
EN::I’m the root of everything… I was the one who destroyed myself… I don’t… deserve this…
NEW:But it’s all my fault…. I’m the one who erased the existence known as “me”…. I don’t… deserve thanks.

Croix(3) :4:4:
JP::そんなこと有りません。
貴方はとても格式高く、誉れ高い存在です。
EN::That’s true. You are a very
traditional, and proud person.
NEW:That’s not true. You are very dignified and honorable.

NISA loves to use “you guys” for 貴方達, regardless of how inappropriate such a familiar form of address is for the situation.

(105) :3:3:
JP::私なんて、破壊するだけし尽くして、何も生んでいないのに…何故私にお礼なんか。
もしかしてお礼って…
EN::I didn’t do anything but to destroy… Appreciation… Are you guys actually going to…
NEW:I have done nothing but eradicate. I have provided nothing. Why would you thank me? Unless by “thanks” you actually mean…

“Courage to get … and accepting it”. It’s painful for me to see this sort of sloppy speech attributed to Chroche Leythal Pastalie.

Cloche(1) :5:5:
JP::貴方が勇気を出して触れてくれた辛い過去の傷は、今の私にとってとても大きな価値になっています…。ありがとう。
EN::Your courage to get in touch with the painful past and accepting it is very valuable to me… thank you.
NEW:Your courage to touch the painful wounds of the past is of great value to me now. Thank you.

The [completion ceremony](http://at2.metalbat.com/?p=291) wasn’t just poorly translated. It was poorly translated in two different ways, like the [flashbacks in level 6-R](http://at2.metalbat.com/?p=149).

Level 7:

(25) :28:28:
JP::そなたは、そなたの持つ心の全てをクロアに預け、嘘偽りない己を、彼に捧げてきた事を誓いますか？
EN::Do you pledge here today that you have given your all to Croix and showed him everything with no lies?
NEW:Do you vow that you have offered your heart, truly and sincerely, to Croix?

Level 9:

(25) :19:19:
JP::そなたは、そなたの持つ心の全てをクロアに預け、嘘偽りない己を、彼に捧げてきた事を誓いますか？
EN::Do you hereby solemnly swear that you have given your all to Croix and showed him everything with no deceptions?
NEW:Do you vow that you have offered your heart, truly and sincerely, to Croix?

Complete meaning breakdown:

(25) :67:67:
JP::これは、自分自身への大きな自信へと繋がるわ。そうすると、今まで出来なかった大きな事を成し遂げることが出来るようになる。
EN::This will lead to having great confidence toward the future. I will be able to do something you could not.
NEW:This will grant you great confidence in yourself. And that leads to the ability to accomplish great things you never could before.

Le sigh. NISA decided to change Infel Phira, a crucial entity in the game, to Infel Pira. There’s no clear reason for this, and like other changes (“Trulyworth”), it corrupts [a Hymmnos word with a real meaning](http://hamsterx.homelinux.org/hymmnoserver/search.php?word=phira). Fine. But they also didn’t consistently translate it, so that in places, it become “Pillar”, a completely unrelated and inapt English word.

(25) :5:5:
JP::クローシェはＩ．Ｐ．Ｄ．だから、詩魔法サーバーは『インフェル・ピラ』。
EN::Cloche’s Magic Server is called “Infel Pillar”, since she is an I.P.D.
NEW:Because Cloche is an IPD, her Song Magic Server is Infel Phira.

(25) :6:6:
JP::彼女が謳う時その力は、空に浮かぶあの
『インフェル・ピラ』から送られてくるの。
EN::She receives her power from that floating Infel Pillar when she sings magic.
NEW:When she sings, the power comes from Infel Phira, floating in the sky.

This is wrong.

(25) :7:7:
JP::今までクローシェは、その送られてくる力で自分の魔法を具現化しているに過ぎなかった。
EN::Cloche’s magic was being controlled by the power she received.
NEW:So far, Cloche has only been using that power to manifest her own magic.

(25) :8:8:
JP::でも、今から行う儀式は、その『インフェル・ピラ』を直接制御出来るようにするのよ。
EN::We will conduct a ceremony now, so that she can control the power herself.
NEW:But the ceremony we are about to perform will allow her to control Infel Phira directly.

(25) :9:9:
JP::そうすることで、インフェル・ピラ自体を、強力な詩魔法として使うことが出来るようになるわ。
EN::That way, she will be able to fully utilize the Infel Pillar.
NEW:Then, she will be able to use Infel Phira itself as an extremely powerful Song Magic.

Wouldn’t have be able indeed.

Croix(3) :5:5:
JP::…何にしても、助かった。
お前の力が無ければ、ここまで来る事は出来なかったよ。
EN::…Either way, you did save me. I wouldn’t have be able to be standing here without you.
NEW:Either way, you saved me. Without you, I wouldn’t have made it this far.

One of the greatest disappointments of the localization of Cloche’s Cosmosphere was how often Infel’s gloriously awful [puns](http://at2.metalbat.com/?p=108) went completely ignored, while the *reactions* to them were left in place. One of the greatest joys, though, was coming up with equally awful puns that work in English. To have such a challenging one at the end of level 9 was like a little parting gift from the Soulspace to me.

(25) :8:8:
JP::今だから言うけど、ここまで壮絶なコスモスフィアって、なかなか類がないわよ。
EN::I can tell you this now, but you will not see a Cosmosphere like this.
NEW:I can tell you now, this Cosmosphere was monumental like not too many are.

Croix(3) :9:9:
JP::…そうなのか！？
EN::…Really!?
NEW:Really!?

(25) :10:10:
JP::ええ。私が動揺するくらいは、ハンパじゃなかったわ。
EN::I hardly ever panic like I did.
NEW:Yeah, if it’s enough to shake me, it’s really something.

Croix(3) :11:11:
JP::そうか…。
そうだよな…随分と苦労したもんな…。
EN::I see.. You’re right.. It was a lot of work…
NEW:I see. You’re right, though, it was quite a struggle.

(25) :12:12:
JP::ま、そうね。
クローシェとクロアだけに、クロウも
ひとしお…って感じ？
EN::Yes, Croix and Cloche, you guys are full of trouble…
NEW:Yep. By the close, I was pretty shaken… Close, shaken. Clo-che.

Croix(3) :13:13:
JP::…。
EN::…
NEW:…

(25) :14:14:
JP::な、何よ！！
EN::W, what!
NEW:W- what!

Croix(3) :15:15:
JP::…最後の最後で、大ダメージを喰らったな…。
EN::…That was pretty painful…
NEW:You saved the absolute worst for the very end…

Serious spoilers for Cloche’s Cosmosphere.

There are two completion ceremonies in Cloche’s Cosmosphere; one fake and one genuine. I am partway through translating the real one (which means I’m almost done with the whole Cosmosphere!) and it reminded me of the poor treatment of the false one.

The completion ceremony, one of the main goals of the Ar tonelico games, is supposed to be the most uplifting, deeply meaningful section of the entire Cosmosphere. It’s the culmination of hours upon hours of becoming spiritually entwined with the heroine. What a disappointment it must have been for people to have to dig through this text to find the sentiments it obscured. Here are some big, representative chunks of both ceremonies.

Level 7, at the fake ceremony.

(25) :2:2:
JP::完了の儀式というのは、貴方がクローシェの全てを見て、そして全てを受け入れたことを承認する儀式なの。
EN::Ending ceremony approves the fact that you have seen and accepted all of Cloche.
NEW:The completion ceremony recognizes that you have seen and accepted Cloche’s whole being.

(25) :3:3:
JP::それは、クローシェ自身と貴方の双方がその事を認め合うことで行われるわ。
EN::You can conduct it by both of you two agreeing to that fact.
NEW:It’s conducted by you and Cloche acknowledging that to one another.

(25) :5:5:
JP::しっかり完了すれば、貴方と彼女の絆はとても強くなる。その証となる詩魔法も紡げるの。
EN::If you complete it right, the ties between you two will be stronger, and you will acquire a magic to prove that.
NEW:If you complete it properly, the bonds between you will become much stronger. You’ll be able to craft the song magic that signifies it.

[…]

(25) :18:18:
JP::えーと…遂にこの時がやってきました。
クローシェは、幾多もの困難を乗り越え…
EN::Err… The time is finally here. Cloche has over come many obstacles…
NEW:Err… The time has come at last. Cloche has overcome many hardships…

(25) :19:19:
JP::えと、果てしないパラダイムシフトをし…
ここまでたどり着きました。
EN::and um, provoked countless Paradigm Shifts… and finally got to this point.
NEW:…and um, performed countless Paradigm Shifts… and made it to this point.

(25) :28:28:
JP::そなたは、そなたの持つ心の全てをクロアに預け、嘘偽りない己を、彼に捧げてきた事を誓いますか？
EN::Do you pledge here today that you have given your all to Croix and showed him everything with no lies?
NEW:Do you vow that you have offered your heart, truly and sincerely, to Croix?

Level 9, at the real ceremony.

(25) :8:8:
JP::貴方は、クローシェの全てを見て、全てを受け入れ、そして全てを許してここまでやってきました。
EN::You have seen and accepted everything about Cloche, and given her chances.
NEW:You have seen everything, received everything, and accepted everything of Cloche’s being.

(25) :9:9:
JP::ここ第９階層では、完了…すなわち今までの全てを承認する儀式を行っていきます。
EN::This floor represents the completion… in other words, we will conduct the ceremony for approval.
NEW:In this, the 9th stratum, the completion ceremony is performed… that is, the recognition of everything that has come to pass.

Croix(3) :10:10:
JP::完了？
全ての承認…？
EN::Completion? For approval…?
NEW:Completion? The recognition of everything?

[…]

Croix(3) :15:15:
JP::宝石がなにも無いな…。
EN::There is no jewels on it…
NEW:There isn’t a single jewel on it.

(25) :16:16:
JP::そう。良く解ったわね。
この宝石を、これから貴方達２人で
集めてくるの。
EN::Good, you noticed. You two are going to go find the jewels to put on it from here.
NEW:You noticed. You two are about to go and collect the jewels for it.

Well, this a little bit I found while translating a section of Phase 4:

Leglius(4) :89:89:
JP::わかっていても、心の底で否定する気持ちがあるってのも…わかるだろう。
EN::Ｂｕｔ　ｔｈｅｒｅ’ｓ　ｔｈａｔ　ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇ　ａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ｂｏｔｔｏｍ
ｏｆ　ｍｙ　ｈｅａｒｔ　ｔｈａｔ　ｄｏｅｓｎ’ｔ．　Ｙｏｕ　ｋｎｏｗ？
NEW:Ｂｕｔ　ｅｖｅｎ　ｓｏ，　Ｉ　ｓｔｉｌｌ　ｈａｖｅ　ｔｈｅｓｅ　ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇｓ　
ｏｆ　ｄｅｎｉａｌ　ａｔ　ｔｈｅ　ｂｏｔｔｏｍ　ｏｆ　ｍｙ ｈｅａｒｔ．．．　
ｄｏ　ｙｏｕ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｉｔ？

This pair of lines struck me as somehow hilarious.

Cloche(1) :113:113: 
JP::…大好き…
EN::...I　love　you...

Croix(3) :114:114:
JP::…パラダイムシフト！！
EN::...Paradigm　Shift!

Hello, friends. Since my last update, I’ve been tremendously busy at work, moving into my first house, sick, caring for my sick wife, entertaining my brother and parents from out of town, and catching up on video games.

But the more Ar tonelico 3 news that comes out, the more excited I get about the series, so I have been squeezing in some translation here and there. If nothing else, we should definitely complete this project before At3 comes out in English!

Here are a few odd little lines I came across in the deeper levels of Cloche’s Cosmosphere. I’m quite looking forward to finishing her Soulspace so that I can move on to Frelia’s binary field. From what I hear, that’s one of the most hastily-localized bits of the game, so it ought to be a challenging exercise.

Cloche(1) :48:48: 
JP::もう、思い出すのも嫌だった…忘れたままでいたかった…
EN::I didn't want to remember it... I wanted to keep forgetting it...
NEW:I didn't want to remember... I wanted to just forget about it...

Croix(3) :2:2:
JP::…意地でも実験の邪魔はさせないってわけか。
EN::...You won't let me interrupt the lab, huh?
NEW:So, you're here to keep me from interrupting the experiment?

JP::でも、その痛みを耐えられなかったクローシェは、
自らの人格から幼い記憶だけを完全に分離し、追放したの…
EN::She purposely cut off that memory and completely let it go...
NEW:But, unable to endure the pain, 
she isolated the memory and banished it from her own persona.

Well,watching one friend of mine playing At2 reminded me of some of the earlier blunders I saw when I was translating Phase 1; and I decided to post one that many should recognize.

Luca(0) :115:4294967295:
JP::そういえば、エナ宮殿跡で謳ってから、私とスープ、お話しできるようになったね！
EN::Ｗｅｌｌ，　ａｔ　ｌｅａｓｔ　Ｉ’ｍ　ａｂｌｅ　ｔｏ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｙｏｕ　ｎｏｗ！
NEW:Ｂｕｔ　ｎｏｗ　ｔｈａｔ　Ｉ　ｔｈｉｎｋ　ｓｏ，　ｓｉｎｃｅ　Ｉ　ｓａｎｇ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ
Ｅｎｎａ　Ｐａｌａｃｅ　Ｒｕｉｎｓ，　Ｉ　ｈａｖｅ　ｂｅｅｎ　ａｂｌｅ　ｔｏ　ｔａｌｋ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｙｏｕ！

(31) :116:4294967295:
JP::そうだね！ボクもビックリしたよ。<LINE>
急にボクが言ってることがわかるようになるんだもの。
EN::Ｙｅａｈ，　ｉｔ’ｓ　ｇｒｅａｔ！　Ｉ　ｗａｓ　ｇｏｉｎｇ　ｂｏｒｄｅｒｌｉｎｅ　ｅｍｏ　
ｔｈｅｒｅ　ｆｏｒ　ａ　ｗｈｉｌｅ．
NEW:Ｙｅａｈ！　Ｉｔ　ａｌｓｏ　ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅｄ　ｍｅ．　Ｉｔ　ｗａｓ　ｓｏ　ｓｕｄｄｅｎ
ｔｈａｔ　Ｉ　ｃｏｕｌｄ　ｔａｌｋ　ａｎｄ　ｙｏｕ　ｃｏｕｌｄ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｍｅ．

Luca(0) :117:4294967295:
JP::え？だって、スープが言葉喋るようにしたんじゃないの？<LINE>
だって前は、プーとしか言わなかったのに…
EN::Ｈｕｈ？　Ｂｕｔ　ｙｏｕ　ｄｏｎ’ｔ　ｈａｖｅ　ｌｏｎｇ　ｅｎｏｕｇｈ　ｂａｎｇｓ
　ｔｏ　ｂｅ　ｅｍｏ．．．
NEW:Ｅｈ？　Ｂｕｔ　ｈｏｗ　ｙｏｕ　ｃｏｕｌｄ　ｓｔａｒｔ　ｔａｌｋｉｎｇ　ｔａｌｋｉｎｇ
ｓｏ　ｗｅｌｌ？　Ｂｅｆｏｒｅ　ｙｏｕ　ｃｏｕｌｄｎ’ｔ．．．

(31) :118:4294967295:
JP::そう聞こえてただけだよー。<LINE>
プープー言ってるように聞こえても、中では今みたいに喋ってたんだよ。
EN::Ｉ　ｗａｓ　ｒｅｆｅｒｒｉｎｇ　ｔｏ　ｎｏｂｏｄｙ　ｂｅｉｎｇ　ａｂｌｅ　ｔｏ　ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄ　ｍｅ．
NEW:Ｔｈａｔ　ｗａｓ　ｊｕｓｔ　ｈｏｗ　ｙｏｕ　ｈｅａｒｄ　ｉｔ．　Ｅｖｅｎ　ｉｆ　ｙｏｕ　ｈｅａｒｄ　ｉｔ
ａｓ　ｏｎｌｙ　ｐｕｐｕｐｕ，　Ｉ　ｗａｓ　ａｃｔｕａｌｌｙ　ｔａｌｋｉｎｇ．

Luca(0) :119:4294967295:
JP::そっかー。でもスープとお話し出来るなんてちょっとビックリ。<LINE>
ねえ、スープってどこに住んでたの？
EN::Ｏｈ，　Ｉ　ｇｅｔ　ｉｔ　ｎｏｗ．<LINE>
Ｓｏ，　ｗｈｅｒｅ　ｄｉｄ　ｙｏｕ　ｃｏｍｅ<LINE>
ｆｒｏｍ．．．ｏｒｉｇｉｎａｌｌｙ？
NEW:Ｏｈ　ｉｔ’ｓ　ｔｈａｔ　ｓｏ？　Ｓｔｉｌｌ，　Ｉ’ｍ　ａ　ｌｉｔｔｌｅ　ｓｕｒｐｒｉｓｅｄ　ｔｈａｔ
Ｉ　ｃａｎ　ｔａｌｋ　ｔｏ　ｙｏｕ．Ｓｏ，　Ｓｏｏｐｅ，　ｗｈｅｒｅ　ｄｉｄ　ｙｏｕ　ｃｏｍｅ
ｆｒｏｍ？

Here, I just say that adding such things to an scene that’s not supposed to be funny is simply unnecesary.

Well, this part is taken from Jakuri’s Lv. 2 Cosmosphere, as part of an optional event. However, I think this part wasn’t given the necessary care it should, given that Wave Theory (and all of its derivatives) are the basis of the Ar tonelico world. And don’t worry about spoilers, since this part doesn’t contain any.

(205) :10:10:
JP::この宇宙は波動で構成されています。
EN::Ｔｈｉｓ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｉｓ　ｃｏｍｐｒｉｓｅｄ　ｏｆ　ｗａｖｅｓ．
NEW:Ｔｈｉｓ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｉｓ　ｃｏｍｐｒｉｓｅｄ　ｏｆ　ｗａｖｅｓ．

(205) :11:11:
JP::およそビックバンと呼ばれる類の「この」
世界の覚醒たる事象は、たった一つの原子核エクサピーコによってもたらされま
した。
EN::Ｔｈｅ　ｂｉｇ　ｂａｎｇ　ｔｈａｔ　ａｗａｋｅｎｅｄ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｗｏｒｌｄ　ｗａｓ　ｃａｕｓｅｄ　ｂｙ　ａ　
ｌｉｔｔｌｅ　ａｔｏｍｉｃ　ｎｕｃｌｅｕｓ　ｃａｌｌｅｄ　ｔｈｅ　ｅｘａ　ｐｉｅｃｏ．
NEW:Ｔｈｅ　ｂｉｇ　ｂａｎｇ　ｔｈａｔ　ｃｒｅａｔｅｄ　??ｔｈｉｓ??　ｗｏｒｌｄ　ｗａｓ　ｃａｕｓｅｄ　ｂｙ　
ｊｕｓｔ　ａｎ　ａｔｏｍｉｃ　ｎｕｃｌｅｕｓ　ｃａｌｌｅｄ　ｔｈｅ　Ｅｘａ　Ｐｉｃｏ．

(205) :12:12:
JP::エクサピーコはそういった天文学的種類の波動を、時間という概念では計測
できない程の短い時間内で、猛烈に変動させています。
EN::Ｅｘａ　ｐｉｅｃｏ　ｃｈａｎｇｅｓ　ｔｈｅ　ａｓｔｒｏｎｏｍｉｃａｌ　ｗａｖｅ　ｍｏｔｉｏｎｓ　ａｔ　ａ　ｒａｐｉｄ　
ｒａｔｅ　ｔｈａｔ　ｙｏｕ　ｃａｎｎｏｔ　ｍｅａｓｕｒｅ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｔｉｍｅ．
NEW:Ｅｘａ　Ｐｉｃｏ　ｃｈａｎｇｅｓ　ｔｈｅ　ａｓｔｒｏｎｏｍｉｃａｌ　ｗａｖｅ　ｍｏｔｉｏｎｓ　ａｔ　ｓｕｃｈ　ａ　
ｒａｐｉｄ　ａｎｄ　ｖｉｏｌｅｎｔ　ｒａｔｅ　ｔｈａｔ　ｗｅ　ｃａｎｎｏｔ　ｍｅａｓｕｒｅ　ｉｔ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｏｕｒ　ｇｅｎｅｒａｌ　
ｃｏｎｃｅｐｔ　ｏｆ　ｔｉｍｅ．

(205) :13:13:
JP::すると、その短い時間事にバランスを失った波動の力、すなわち（歪み）が
外に放射されることになり――
EN::Ａｎ　ｕｎｓｔａｂｌｅ　ｆｏｒｃｅ　ｏｆ　ｗａｖｅ　ｍｏｔｉｏｎ　ｆｏｒ　ａ　ｓｈｏｒｔ　ａｍｏｕｎｔ　ｏｆ　ｔｉｍｅ，　
ａ　ｄｉｓｔｏｒｔｉｏｎ，　ｉｓ　ｅｍｉｔｔｅｄ　ｏｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｏｕｔｓｉｄｅ．．．
NEW:Ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ　ｏｆ　ｔｈａｔ，　ｔｈｅ　ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ｗａｖｅ　ｌｏｓｅｓ　ｉｔｓ　ｂａｌａｎｃｅ　ｉｎ　
ｔｈａｔ　ｓｈｏｒｔ　ｐｅｒｉｏｄ　ｏｆ　ｔｉｍｅ．　Ｔｈａｔ　ｉｓ，　ｉｔ　ｅｍｉｔｓ　ａ　（ｄｉｓｔｏｒｔｉｏｎ）　ｔｏ　ｔｈｅ　
ｏｕｔｓｉｄｅ．．．

(205) :14:14:
JP::波動科学でもおなじみの「導体波」が導き出されます。
EN::Ｐｒｏｖｏｋｉｎｇ　ａ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　ｗａｖｅ，　ａｓ　ｙｏｕ’ｒｅ　ｆａｍｉｌｉａｒ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｆｒｏｍ　
ｗａｖｅ　ｓｃｉｅｎｃｅ．
NEW:Ｄｅｒｉｖｉｎｇ　ｉｎｔｏ　ａ　??Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅ??，　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ｙｏｕ　ｓｈｏｕｌｄ　ｋｎｏｗ　ｂｙ　
ｎｏｗ　ｆｒｏｍ　ｗａｖｅ　ｓｃｉｅｎｃｅ．

(205) :15:15:
JP::Ｄ波、Ｈ波以外にも当然導体波は存在します。
EN::Ｔｈｅｒｅ　ａｒｅ　ｍａｎｙ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　ｗａｖｅｓ，
ｉｎｃｌｕｄｉｎｇ　Ｄ－ｗａｖｅｓ　ａｎｄ　Ｈ－ｗａｖｅｓ．
NEW:Ｎａｔｕｒａｌｌｙ，　ｔｈｅｒｅ　ａｒｅ　ｓｅｖｅｒａｌ　ｃｌａｓｓｅｓ　ｏｆ　Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅｓ，　
ｉｎｃｌｕｄｉｎｇ　Ｄ－Ｗａｖｅｓ　ａｎｄ　Ｈ－Ｗａｖｅｓ．

(205) :16:16:
JP::そしてその導体波は、この世界空間を伝播していき、彼（エクサピーコ）の
「宇宙」を作ります。
EN::Ａｌｌ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　ｗａｖｅｓ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｔｒａｎｓｍｉｔ　ｔｈｒｏｕｇｈ　ｔｈｅ　ａｉｒ　ａｎｄ　
ｃｒｅａｔｅ　ｔｈｅ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｏｆ　ｅｘａ　ｐｉｅｃｏ．
NEW:Ｔｈｕｓ、　ｔｈｅ　Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅｓ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｐｒｏｐａｇａｔｅ　ｔｈｒｏｕｇｈ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｐａｃｅ　ｏｆ　
ｔｈｉｓ　ｗｏｒｌｄ、　ｃｒｅａｔｉｎｇ　ｔｈｅ　Ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｏｆ　Ｅｘａ　Ｐｉｃｏ．

(205) :17:17:
JP::宇宙とは、世界の中でエクサピーコが影響を及ぼしている地域のことになり
ます。
EN::Ｔｈｉｓ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｉｓ　ａ　ｐｌａｃｅ　ｔｈａｔ　ｉｓ　ａｆｆｅｃｔｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｅｘａ　ｐｉｅｃｏ．
NEW:Ｔｈｅｒｅｆｏｒｅ、　ｔｈｅ　Ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　ｔｕｒｎｓ　ｉｎｔｏ　ａｎ　ａｒｅａ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｗｏｒｌｄ　ｗｈｅｒｅ　
Ｅｘａ　Ｐｉｃｏ　ｅｘｅｒｔｓ　ｉｔｓ　ｉｎｆｌｕｅｎｃｅ．

...

(205) :29:29:
JP::さて、これらの導体波は、新たな定常波を生みます。
EN::Ｗｅｌｌ，　ｓｏ　ｔｈｏｓｅ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　ｗａｖｅｓ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｐｒｏｄｕｃｅ　ｎｅｗ　ｓｔａｎｄｉｎｇ　
ｗａｖｅｓ．
NEW:Ｗｅｌｌ，　ｔｈｏｓｅ　Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅｓ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｐｒｏｄｕｃｅ　ｎｅｗ　Ｓｔａｔｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅｓ．

(205) :30:30:
JP::それはエクサピーコの産み出した導体波が、世界に広がるナムの海に作用し
た結果であり、
EN::Ｔｈｉｓ　ｉｓ　ａ　ｒｅｓｕｌｔ　ａｆｔｅｒ　ｔｈｅ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　ｗａｖｅｓ　ｐｒｏｄｕｃｅｄ　ｂｙ　ｅｘａ　
ｐｉｅｃｏ　ｈａｖｅ　ａｆｆｅｃｔｅｄ　ｔｈｅ　Ｓｅａ　ｏｆ　Ｎａｍ．
NEW:Ｔｈａｔ　ｉｓ　ｔｈｅ　ｒｅｓｕｌｔ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｗａｖｅｓ　ｃｒｅａｔｅｄ　ｂｙ　Ｅｘａ　Ｐｉｃｏ　
ｅｘｐａｎｄｉｎｇ　ｔｈｅｉｒ　ａｒｅａ　ｏｆ　ｅｆｆｅｃｔ　ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｗｏｒｌｄ，　ｓｔａｒｔｉｎｇ　ｗｉｔｈ　ａ　ｐｏｉｎｔ　ｉｎ　
ｔｈｅ　Ｓｅａ　ｏｆ　Ｎｕｍ．

(205) :31:31:
JP::その結果、その地点のナムの海は宇宙となるのです。
EN::Ｆｒｏｍ　ｔｈｉｓ，　ｙｏｕ　ｃａｎ　ｓａｙ　ｔｈａｔ　ｔｈｅ　Ｓｅａ　ｏｆ　Ｎａｍ　ｉｓ　ｔｈｅ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ　
ａｔ　ｔｈｉｓ　ｐｏｉｎｔ．
NEW:Ａｓ　ａ　ｒｅｓｕｌｔ，　ｔｈａｔ　ｐｏｉｎｔ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　Ｓｅａ　ｏｆ　Ｎｕｍ　ｔｕｒｎｓ　ｉｎｔｏ　ｔｈｅ　
Ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓｅ．

(205) :32:32:
JP::一般的な波動論でも定説である「波動の干渉」によって、導体Ｄ波というエ
ネルギーが…
EN::Ｊｕｓｔ　ａｓ　ａｎ　ｅｓｔａｂｌｉｓｈｅｄ　ｔｈｅｏｒｙ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ｕｎｉｖｅｒｓａｌ　ｗａｖｅ　ｔｈｅｏｒｙ，　ａｎ　
ｅｎｅｒｇｙ　ｏｆ　ａ　ｃｏｎｄｕｃｔｉｎｇ　Ｄ－ｗａｖｅ　ｂｙ．．．
NEW:Ｊｕｓｔ　ａｓ　ｔｈｅ　ｐｏｐｕｌａｒ　ｙｅｔ　ｅｓｔａｂｌｉｓｈｅｄ　ｗａｖｅ　ｔｈｅｏｒｙ　ｏｆ　??Ｗａｖｅ　
Ｉｎｔｅｒｆｅｒｅｎｃｅ??　ｓａｙｓ，　ａｎ　ｅｎｅｒｇｙ　ｋｎｏｗｎ　ａｓ　ａ　Ｄｙｎａｍｉｃ　Ｄ－Ｗａｖｅ．．．

(205) :33:33:
JP::その地点の振幅０周波数０の空間に、振幅と周波数を与えるのです。
EN::Ｔｈｅ　??ｉｎｔｅｒｆｅｒｅｎｃｅ　ｏｆ　ａ　ｗａｖｅ??　ｗｉｌｌ　ｄｅｔｅｒｍｉｎｅ　ｔｈｅ　ａｍｐｌｉｔｕｄｅ　
ａｎｄ　ｆｒｅｑｕｅｎｃｙ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ｉｎｉｔｉａｌ　ｓｐａｃｅ　ａｔ　ｚｅｒｏ．
NEW:Ｄｅｔｅｒｍｉｎｅｓ　ｔｈｅ　ａｍｐｌｉｔｕｄｅ　ａｎｄ　ｆｒｅｑｕｅｎｃｙ　ｏｆ　ａ　ｐｏｉｎｔ　ｗｈｅｎｅｖｅｒ　
ｔｈｅ　ａｍｐｌｉｔｕｄｅ　ａｎｄ　ｆｒｅｑｕｅｎｃｙ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｐａｃｅ　ｉｔ　ｏｃｃｕｐａｔｅｓ　ｉｓ　ｚｅｒｏ．

I know this is something difficult to understand, but NISA’s version doesn’t make any sense in many points (not to mention modifying the terminology that was already established).